There's a thing I almost always notice in every clothing or jewellery store now, and it's getting harder not to.
I see the product page loading with these amazing shots at the top, well-priced, a clean description, an "add to cart" button. Then you scroll for more, and the page is already over. No reviews. No details on how it'll fit or when it'll arrive.
But you'll see the founder's Instagram is full of people losing their minds in the comments. And none of it, none of it has made it onto the page where the buying actually happens. That's a big reason founders end up reaching out after they see this gap.
And the response I get most often, after I show a founder their own store through that lens, is something like:
"damn…that's a good point, how are you noticing this stuff?"
The honest answer is that I've spent the last few years rebuilding Shopify product pages for clothing and jewellery brands at $10–50K MRR and the same few patterns keep appearing across almost every one. I'm Ryan, founder of VAS Enterprise, a conversion improvement company. So there's also that.
So that's the mission today. Why does everyone keep visiting, only to leave empty-handed?
I could've written a separate page for clothing, jewellery, accessories and whatever.
But honestly that'd be dumb.
The core principles are the same. A site that converts is a site that converts.
At the end of the day, everything is unified under e-commerce, and the end goal is always to make as many visitors of your store into recurring satisfied customers. Who will eventually go on to talk positively about your brand and purchase again. Also, this isn't about turning a 5.7% conversion rate into a 5.9%. It's about turning a 1% into a 3%. And that 2% matters A LOT. For a brand doing $20K MRR that's an extra $4,800 a month from the same traffic you already have.
I also want to HEAVILY state that nothing in here is a rule. Every store is different. What works on a $30K/month jewellery brand might be wildly wrong for a $70K/month streetwear label. So read this with a grain of salt. Apply your own brain to your own situation. I just want this to inspire you to ask better questions about your own store.
And sorry in advance for the run-on sentences and the cursing I'm a conversion guy, not a writer.
So why do people leave without buying?
The leap of faith
So Here's what I would do now.
Alright, so what now?
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